Mr Hafiz : Week 10 ; Almost home progression

So,

here are some progression i made after receiving comments from Mr Hafiz,

Mr Hafiz commented that it looked flat and uninteresting.

He also said to add a sense of depth to my illustration, and lay low with the vectors. ( as well as, try my luck with the tablet)

And here i tried it again, even adding texture, as well as vector. 

Here Mr Hafiz helped by adding a vignette effect as a spotlight, shining over Mary.

Although he did comment that the audience look gooey. 

[i really dont know how to respond to that]

Here i played around with the colours and tried doing it in black and white.

I think it doesnt look half baddd~

AND I DREW A CELLO. 

AHHAHAHAHHAH